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So Close (3)

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As they approached the next town, they prepared for attack. Before they could even reached shore, they had already sighted Law's submarine. It was in plain sight at the dock. Mimi's ship docked a little ways from the town so there would be no chase. Mimi led a group of soldiers off of the ship. Aldo led his own group also. Mimi's squad was going to steak out by the submarine, and Aldo's group was going to chase the Heart pirates out of town if they were even in the town. Nova stayed on the ship with the rest of the soldiers just in case the hearts tried running. SO the plan went into action.
"Everybody stay low," Mimi whispered to her squad."Keep hidden until I give word."
Her squad nodded. They sat in the bushes and waited. Meanwhile Aldo went through different stores, pubs, and homes in the town. As they had hoped, the Heart's were in a general store getting supplies. Aldo's squad burst in and tried to trap the pirates in the store, but as Aldo had expected, that plan didn't go that well. Bepo had taken out the whole squad but Aldo. The rest of the group stayed, but Aldo had forced Bepo to stay and fight.
  At Mimi's position, she could see the rest of the crew rushing towards the submarine. Mimi gave the signal and zipped her entire squad onto the dock via rainbow. Mimi immediately attacked Law as her squad attacked Jean Bart, Penguin, and Shachi. Her entire squad was finished but she continued to fight Law. Her arms were diamond hard swords and she also attacked Law with rainbows from the ground. But every time Mimi came close to injuring Law, Law would slice her. But being a logia, Mimi would just form back together. The rest of the heart pirate crew ran into the submarine. As one of the injured Marine soldier witnessed all of this, he called Nova with a mini snail. Nova approached with the navy ship, all stations set and ready.
   As they thought, the submarine had sunk. Nova kept the ship on course right behind the submarine. After several minutes of chasing, The Heart pirates surfaced and decided the only way was to fight. as soon as they actually surfaced, several cannons fired directly at the tiny sub. But they submarine had a few tricks of its own. Two huge cannons fired right back at the ship. Before the cannon balls could hit the ship, the exploded. Nova had shot them down.
"Come out!" Nova shouted."Fight me"
Soon enough, big Jean Bart crawled out and stood on the sub's wood oouter deck.
"It's on!" Jean shouted at Nova.

Meanwhile in the town, the fight between Bepo and Aldo was getting heated. They had been wailing at each other for more than 10 minutes and the fight was going nowhere. Every kick was blocked and every punch was kicked. The only thing getting injured was their will power to keep fighting each other. Then fight played out this way until Bepo nailed Aldo right in the stomach. Aldo got the wind knocked right out of him as he fell to the ground. Bepo took that as an opportunity to split. Bepo ten began running toward Mimi and Trafalgar's battle. Aldo got up as soon as he could and began chasing right after Bepo.
  In Mimi's battle, things weren't looking as good for Law. Mimi had finally stayed focused long enough to rainbow-strap Law to the ground.
  "Dead or Alive? They prefer you alive so..." Mimi said as she sat on Laws stomach. "What should I get with your reward money?"
  Law's sword lay only inches from his hand. It taunted him and Mimi could see this as she cheerfully sat on Law. She couldn't stop smiling as she waited for Aldo to meet her here.
  "Honestly, I thought this was going to take me a lot longer than it did," Mimi said. "I guess I get to move to Monkey D. Luffy sooner."
"Monkey D. Luffy?" Law said curiously."If you let me go, I can help you find him."
  "And fall in with the favors of Don Flamingo? No thanks," Mimi said.
"Did your research... impressive," said Law.
  "Well I have to succeed on my first assignment," Mimi smiled before being kicked in the face by Bepo. Mimi lost her concentration and accidentally let Law go. Bepo bowed and apologized before he and Law went running off to the last town they had been to. About 30 seconds later, Aldo came running up to Mimi and helped her up. He and Mimi ran after Bepo and Law.
  Meanwhile, on the water, Nova was doing fairly well considering she was the one with the sharp shooting and there wasn't much Jean could do. He basically was dodging bullets until Law and Bepo called. Then he rushed back inside the sub and immediately the Marine ship began shooting at him again. But it was too late because the submarine had sunk. It popped back up by the shore where Bepo and Law climbed in. By the time Mimi and Aldo even got close, the had already submerged again.
  "Call it off," Mimi said into her pocket snail."We'll try again later."
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